Welcome to Six-Sentence Sunday! Thanks to some helpful feedback from Lib, CROWN OF ASH is rocking ahead on all cylinders. I may get to work on it more tonight while I’m sitting in a coffee shop waiting for my daughter’s prom to be done. ;D
This week, Cross makes a terrifying discovery as he is trapped in the Palace of Razors, the stronghold of a dark cadre of mages in control of the Whisperlands…
The blade was heavy in his hands as he approached the murals.
They all showed a spider – the spider, his spider, a giant there, enormous, a pale monstrosity ready to burst with young – as it devoured cities. Mounds of humans fell before the creature’s onslaught. In the murals she was vast, like some legged insectoid moon. Buildings and monuments collapsed beneath her. People, their faces pale with horror, fell into dark rips left in the earth by her monstrous razor limbs.
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Ugh! It had to be spiders. *cringe* Well done. (and damn you for it.)
LOL. I’m always happy to creep you out, Wendy. =D
When it comes to uping the creep factor in a scene all it takes is a spider or snake. Six sentences was all it took for you to have my stomach churning and fighting the cumpulstion to check under my couch for monsters. Nicely done.
Thank you, Jess — sorry to give you the shivers, but I’m happy you found it so effective! =D
Shuddering. Very graphic.
I love how creepy crawly the description is, but I got a little confused by the verb tense shift. I’m sure it makes sense in context of the scene, though.
Or a goof-up on a very sleepy writer’s part. LOL. Corrected — it should all be past tense.
Hee, clearly I have a lot of faith in your abilities based on everything I’ve read so far.
I’m not above a mistake now and again. LOL
Me thinks something is going to happen to that mural very soon! Scary – great six!
Thanks Elyse!
Ewwww *shudder* Jolly good job, though.
Why thank you! =D