Welcome to Six-Sentence Sunday!
I just finished the rough draft of CROWN OF ASH. At just over 111,000 words, this is officially the longest book in the series, and that will still be true even if I nuke my customary 10,000 words from the final product. ;D
Now that I’m done, I have 3 completed projects badly in need of some editing, and starting next week I’ll likely start highlighting scenes from my next release, the horror novel SOMETHING BLACK…
In the meantime, however, enjoy this scene from late in CROWN OF ASH, as Kane and a most unlikely band of allies race towards some desolate ruins hoping to rescue his friends from certain death…
Voth Ra’morg was a shell.
The ruined structure came into view just as the sun sank into the horizon. Jagged stone walls and rusted steel towers shone grey-gold in the dying light. A black and ice-laden marsh surrounded the ruins, but a thin and crumbling network of earth and wooden walkways provided safe passage across the freezing dark bog. Tendrils of green mist hovered over the surface of the water, and thick wooden stakes stood in a perimeter around the desolate city, a wall of black spines.
They weren’t the first to reach the ruins: the Revengers had already beaten them there.
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I was standing there in the landscape. Great writing.
Thank you! =D
Great story! Action is intense.
Thanks, Ryan!
Really excellent writing. I have a visual.
Thanks, Daniela, I appreciate that.
Wow. Great description. I love your use of color.
Thanks, Wendy. I’ve been trying to incorporate more color-centric description into my writing, I find it makes it much more vivid. =D
Great six and wonderful description. The sense of destruction very graphic, creating a certain mood and tone. Gave me shivers.
Thanks, Karyn! =D
Your prose is so lyrical, with such cadence, I find it inspires me to step up my own writing.
Fabulous six, Steven!
You flatter me, Lady. =D
Oh, yeah, nope. Not going in there. (You set the scene so well every time.)
Very descriptive. That’s a place I would NOT want to go.
As usual, your sensory details drag the reader to a place they don’t want to visit.
Makes for kick-ass reading with a healthy dose of shivers. I’m in.
Monica, Elin, J.M., thank you all very much! Sounds like I could start a new career writing travelogues to keep people AWAY from places. ;D