Welcome to Six-Sentence Sunday!
Because I’ve just started the second round of edits for Book 4 of the Blood Skies series, CROWN OF ASH, you’re going to be seeing a bit more of this one.
This week’s excerpt is right near the beginning of the novel. At the end of SOULRAZOR, Eric Cross’s mercenary team is stranded in the distant criminal city of Blacksand. The excerpt below is actually the beginning of Chapter 1, where we catch up with the temporary leader of the group, the witch prison warden-turned mercenary Danica Black.
She dreamed of silk sheets and soft pillows, golden sunlight and ochre clouds. She dreamed of a warm woman in her bed, and birdsong outside the window. She dreamed of sandstone pillars and the smells of cinnamon and hyacinth.
But when Danica Black woke, she found none of those things. She was still in the dirty sheets in a hovel in Blacksand, where she stared out through gritty yellow air filled with blood flies and dust. Everything was moist and damp and tasted like the inside of an engine.
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Great teaser! Especially liked the imagery you used. The last line was my favorite.
Waking up to reality can be tough. Great six!
Wow. So much in so few words. Great job.
I love the use of all the senses. Very immersive six.
The contrast of her dream and her reality is stark, but it’s painted so vividly, I can’t help but love it.
Fantastic work, to create two such vivid and contrasting images in just six sentences.
Very visual, Steven. I love the line– “…and tasted like the inside of an engine.” Nice six
Beautiful writing, fantastic dichotomy, I want to read this book!
That’s terrific, Steven. I know where I’d sooner wake up
It feels like so much more than just six sentences. A wonderful poetic dream, ended by the brutal nightmare that is waking up in reality. Fantastic!
Thank you everybody! =D
Your writing is fantastically sensory specific and descriptive. I’m sold. I just bought every one of your available books. Great Six!
Wow — thanks a ton, M.L.! I appreciate that! =D