Welcome to Six-Sentence Sunday!
This week I’m hitting you with something new. SOMETHING BLACK… to be specific.
My next release is a stand-alone horror novel set right in Washington, just south of Seattle, when a commuter train accident is just the precursor to a series of nightmarish events that has a small group of survivors fighting for their lives.
This excerpt is from the opening of the book: a strange dream sequence in which the main character, an ex-soldier named Rafe, glimpses into the shadows of a forest on a distant world that spews forth nightmares intent on devouring humankind…
It is a graveyard of dead black trees smoking with shadow. It stands like a crude scar on a landscape littered with pools of oil and grey frost. Ice clouds float low in the sky, and creeping mist rolls over fields of shale and broken coal.
A woman stands in the briars, and her bare feet are bloody and raw. She is beautiful and pale, with alabaster skin and hair that flows in waves. She stands in the prison of sleeping trees; the branches claw at her like violent, jealous lovers.
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Wow, you have a serious talent for visualization, and with the power of your mind’s eye, I see fame in your future.
Thank you, Daniela, I’m flattered! =D
Your imagery is awesome. Great six.
Thanks, Wendy!
Really like the concept for this story. Totally absorbing.
Thank you, Ryan!
Your writing always has this gut-wrenching quality to it, but this particular snippet gives a particular punch that is equal parts discomforting and riveting.
Clearly, I liked it.
Wow, thank you! Gut-wrenching is what I was going for…and this part if pretty tame compared to some later scenes… ;D
Your imagery is always fantastic, but I particularly liked the “violent, jealous lovers” line this time. Great job!
Thank you, Vivien!
I love how you paint this woman as emotionally detached, strikingly gorgeous, and inherently terrifying all in one fell swoop. Soon, she will rain death upon them all. Or bake cookies. You know.
HAHAHAHA
Thanks, Candice.
Wow! Very impressive writing. You managed to pull me right in. Not easy to do with such a short amount of sentences. You’ve got talent and skill.
Thanks, Christina, I appreciate that! [blushes]
Vividly descriptive six! Loved that last line!
Thanks, Nichelle!
More than anything, it’s the detail about her bloody feet that disturbs me. That’s a pinpoint detail that hones this and makes it chilling.
Thanks, Monica!
There’s a running gag among my circle of writer’s friends about feet — dead feet, ugly feet, severed feet, etc. I kind of threw this in as a shout out to the group, seeing if any of them would notice. ;D
Beautiful but edgy visual images, just right for what you say the story will be. Very appropriate.