Welcome to Six-Sentence Sunday!
In the last couple of weeks I’ve covered excerpts from BLOOD SKIES and BLACK SCARS, so it seemed only logical to continue on this week with an excerpt from Book 4 in the series, SOULRAZOR.
In this scene, Eric Cross and his mercenary team have broken into a Bonespire, a dread vampire fortress, where they’re supposed to learn about the Ebon Cities’ new and secret weapon. As is prone to happen when wandering around in hostile vampire fortresses, Cross eventually gets separated from the others and stumbles into a most unpleasant area…
Cross found himself in a chamber of dead girls.
Deep pits filled with dark fluid filled the breadth of the enormous room in a grid-like pattern. The body of a young woman hung suspended over each vat; each corpse dangled from a network of dark chains that ran like a massive web across the cathedral-like ceiling.
Each body was pale-haired and pale-skinned, nude and not entirely human. The flesh was moldered and grey, and each corpse was latched to at least a dozen hooks in her shoulders, torso and outstretched arms. Black fluid, like grisly oil, dripped off the bodies and into the vats.
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An Excerpt from SOULRAZOR for #sixsunday http://t.co/8UqiDPqu #dystopian #darkfantasy #scifi Please #RT
Most unpleasant.
HAHAHAHA. Well put.
Gripping and grisly! Very effective first sentence.
Thank you! =D
Six-Sentence Sunday: An Excerpt from SOULRAZOR http://t.co/E4LmyfeG via @Daezarkian
Very creepy. I might have nightmares about this, but that’s a sign of very effective writing.
Still, don’t have nightmares. I’d feel bad. ;D
Yuck! Not your writing, just the scene. It has to be one of the most grisely scenes I’ve ever read, and seems like a great way to kick off the book. By the way, I love the title soulrazor.
Thank you, Jess! It’s not the very beginning of the novel, but it’s close (opening of Chapter 3).
Truly dark and disturbing and very very bold. Gutsy, impressive six!
Thanks, Daniela!
Jeebuz, you creep me out even more each time. (Although I had to laugh at Wendy’s understatement. Most unpleasant, indeed!)
Thanks, Monica. Yeah, I think Wendy said it best. LOL
I’m with ManicScribbler. That’s one hell of a first line for this snippet. Immediately gripping. And the follow-up doesn’t let go. Horrific and dramatic and wonderful.
Thanks, J.M., I appreciate it!
very creepy snippet
Thanks you, Maryellen!
Oh, you’ve done it again. Such a visual! Great six, Steven.
Thanks, Teresa!
Er. Have to feel for the girls. Why girls? Really want to read this now.
There is a reason it’s girls, and why they’re all identical, but it’s complicated. Might be a bit hard to explain without giving it all away. ;D
Very dark. Very good! Must catch up on your other stuff. Well done.
Thanks, Richard! =D