Welcome to Six-Sentence Sunday!
Editing for THE WITCH’S EYE is in full swing. In this scene, Cross has been taken prisoner by an unusual trio of beings who live in the walls of the dreaded Carrion Rift. Days of imprisonment and torture have robbed him of his senses, and as he struggles to escape he first has to remember why he’s trying to get out of the Rift in the first place…
Drowned…no, she hadn’t drowned.
He lay still in the dark, his body soft and liquid, as if rotting from within. Pockets of mist like vertical pools filled the air, a haze vapor of drugged smoke. He clawed his way back towards consciousness, fought to narrow his vision through the ice blue light. Scabs and blisters and scar tissue covered his back.
She didn’t drown…she’d died, burning, on the train.
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After being gone from SSS for the last few months, I’m so glad yours is the first I get to read on my return. As always, the seething detail you provide in these little snippets thrusts me straight into the scene, every sense activated (that sounds like a Wonder Twin power, lol).
Anyway, fantastic job!
Thanks, Vivien, and welcome back. (Wonder Twin Powers….ahem. Sorry.)
Wonderful, vivid imagery. Exactly what I’ve come to expect from your writing! I love the way that Cross is still haunted by the events of book 1.
Thank you Clare! Yeah, Cross is having a hard time letting go, and it may end up being his undoing.
rotting from withing-that can’t be a good sensation. Your descriptions never cease to blow my mind.
I just downloaded Blood Skies and am really looking forward to reading it.
Thanks, Jess — I hope you enjoy it! =D
There’s an immense weightiness to these six, Steven. So much horror and tragedy.
It seems to come natural to me. Not good. ;D Thanks Monica!
Wow, Steven I love it. The way you utilize these images, it’s very unique.
Thanks Dana! =D
You’re going to have to go easy on Cross sometime! The poor man, is he ever going to come to terms with her death? Very vivid six, as always.
Easy on Cross? Naaaaaaaaah. ;D
Thanks, Karen!
Your imagery is amazing. And you have such a unique voice, Steven. Always amazed at your writing.
Thank you, Teresa! =D
Wow, that was a mind-blowing description. Great six!
Thanks Elyzabeth! =D